Plan plan plan!
I really do need to start training myself to write by following a plan. Of course, that plan can be flexible, but lunging in headfirst is not going to work forever! Plus...at least plan for the upcoming chapter or something...
Since reading the old one...I really get the feeling that it was so rushed! There was no proper research...and it was just...rushed. Not to mention, no proper development. :P
I mean. On its own, its ok. But work of that standard is simply not acceptable if I wanna get better. >_<
Although, that I know what I need to do about it shows I have improved since then.
Still...Mada mada dane. :P
Fly forth, guided by your heart ;
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